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Posted on 01-08-08 10:01 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Like the moonlight upon the sleeping lake
You shone right upon this empty soul
Filled my heart with your flowing love
Healed my soul, u made me whole

Like the sunshine on the morning dew
You laid right upon this sleeping eyes
Woke me up, to this brand new world
became my light, became my paradise

Like the gentle wind upon the autumn tree
You swayed me into those sleepless nights
Sang me songs, and whispered to me
Held me close, amidst the flickering lights

You held my hand, you held me tight
told me tales of your forgotten glories
In your arms, I would fade every night
lost in you, I'd etch my memories

Like the raindrops upon the open sea
You peltered and melted upon me
I dont know how or when
you just became a part of me

- 7032junior
 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:09 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good one. Keem them coming.
 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:34 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Was gonna stop since no one was commenting. But you gave me one more reason to post. Cheers Nepal ko chora

 
Posted on 01-09-08 9:10 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Chimgalogi Magar,

"Winners never quit; quitters never win." Your writing is good. Please, keep your emotions flowing.


 
Posted on 01-10-08 1:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I didnt mean quit writing.. Just quit posting over here.. lol.  And this is definitely my last poem post. Thanks for your support all this time though. Aint no fun posting if there isnt much appreciation. Cheers biradhar

 


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