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Posted on 09-26-11 12:02 AM     [Snapshot: 47]     Reply [Subscribe]
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जुनेली रात
सुनसान बाताबरण
म र मेरी समिक्छ्या
एक्लै!

 
 
Posted on 10-16-11 12:08 PM     [Snapshot: 1990]     Reply [Subscribe]
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@samikshya: eso samikshya garya bhe ni hunthyo ni ... :)
@GT: Thank you much. Ma furkya chhu.Kunai ni bela kaabita furna sakchha...:))
 
Posted on 10-25-11 9:05 PM     [Snapshot: 2143]     Reply [Subscribe]
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 The Burdened Ease of Bickering

  When everything fails, I complain. It is a gourmet schadenfraude pie: aromatic and soul-curing. I have grown addicted to it, and sometimes I find it more delightful than usual. Quite often the contrary. I am addicted to the damn pie and I don’t seem to stop my growing voracity anytime soon. Although the disease of soul-scorching rhetorical retrospection diabetic seems to be growing inside me at an alarming rate, the whimpering and grumbling simply doesn’t seem to stop. Why? Well, just like any obnoxiously normal person, it gives me a sense of nirvana, and I transcend into the visceral realms of security by shifting the blame on others. And like the thousand times before, I start to beat my killer chest with my fist in a King-kong-ish fashion, proudly proclaiming “It’s not my fault”.

 Strangely, the aftermath is incredibly dull and I admit that I vomit. I have done it so many times that I have actually become an ementophobe. I even feel quite stupid for doing so. In the end it all ends the same and I am left under those dark clouds of remorse with shrapnel of disgust in my head, and a brutally wounded hope. After a while the rabid self-realization steps in and the necessity to pull back the strings together directs me to start from the scratch or even move on with it. Life without complains and disgust, a life of solace. Is it remotely possible?

  Just like the nature’s fundamental laws of causality, the linear and discrete hope should exist in my opinion. After all anything broken could be fixed, anything imagined could be created. Supposedly it only requires an act of diligent perseverance and grit. But even for me, when I think in a global scale, the ramifications don’t make sense. Who gives a toss on the selfish individualism? What about the Butterfly Effect and the non-linearity of life? Ah, I can’t really think about it. I’d rather bicker and complain. It's much easier. Nasty, very nasty, horrible eh! Ugh!!!!! (I puke) ………….



 
Posted on 10-25-11 11:06 PM     [Snapshot: 2173]     Reply [Subscribe]
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मैले सपनाहरु देखेकै छैन

 

मैले सपना नदेखेको धेरै भयो

मैले सपनाहरुबारे नलेखेको धेरै भयो

तिमीलाई थाहा हुनुपर्छ

सपनाहरुको पुल बनाएर जीवनरुपी नदी तर्ने मान्छे

तिमीलाई थाहा हुनुपर्छ

बिपनाहरु सपनाले सजाएर खाली - खाली मनहरु भर्ने मान्छे

तर

महत्तोकांग्छाको बाढीले सपनाका पुलहरू भात्कयेपस्चात

अबिस्वाशको आधीले अलिकति हासेको मनपनि भताभुङ्ग बनायेपस्चात

मैले आजकल सपनाहरु देखेकै छैन

हो मैले आजकल सपनाहरुबारे लेखेकै छैन


 
Posted on 10-26-11 1:17 AM     [Snapshot: 2208]     Reply [Subscribe]
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राम्रो प्रयास ठिटो!  
 
Posted on 10-26-11 1:21 AM     [Snapshot: 2217]     Reply [Subscribe]
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समिक्षा, पिस र सम्पूर्ण साझाबासीहरुमा समर्पित.....

फेरि एउटा नयाँ सम्बन्धको खोजीमा

हो म फेरि एउटा नयाँ सम्बन्धको खोजीमा छु ।
भर्खर एउटा सम्बन्ध गर्ल्याम्मगुर्लुम्म ढल्यो ।
एउटा मान्छेसँगको सम्बन्ध,
एउटा सपनासँगको सम्बन्ध,
एउटा फूल र त्यसभित्र रहेको सुगन्धसँगको सम्बन्ध,
सारा खरानी भई जल्यो ।
त्यसैले म फेरि एउटा नयाँ सम्बन्धको खोजीमा छु ।

मान्छे मान्छे बिचको सम्बन्ध,
मान्छे र प्रकृति बिचको सम्बन्ध,
भूगोलसँगको सम्बन्ध,
भूगर्भसँगको सम्बन्ध,
आकाशसँगको सम्बन्ध,
एक मुठी सास फेर्न हावासँगको सम्बन्ध,
अहो! कति धेरै सम्बन्ध ! अनि कति थरी सम्बन्ध !

एक पछि अर्को,
अर्को पछि अर्को,
बन्दै र भत्किदै गरेका सम्बन्धहरु ।
एउटा गर्भमा नौ महिना लामो सम्बन्ध राखेपछी
सुरु भएको संसारसँगको सम्बन्धको यो श्रिंखला
अबिछिन्न जारी रहनेछ ।
एउटा सम्बन्ध जीवनसँग नटुटेसम्म
अनि अर्को सम्बन्ध मृत्युसँग नजुटेसम्म ।

हे मेरा गुरुहरु!
तिमीहरुले मलाई ढाट्यौ ।
मान्छे स्वतन्त्र छैन ।
हो यहाँ कोही पनि स्वतन्त्र छैन ।
सब बाँधिएका छन्,
सब कसिएका छन्,
सब जकडिएका छन्,
सम्बन्धहरुको जालोमा ।
एउटा सम्बन्ध चुँडिन्छ,
अनि सयौँ सम्बन्ध जोडिन्छ,
अनि हजारौ बनी फैलिन्छ,
एउटासँग अर्को, अर्कोसँग अर्को
माकुराको जालोजस्तै ।

यो संसारको लागि,
संसारबासीहरुको लागि,
म हुनु र नहुनुको अर्थ
केवल मसँगको सम्बन्ध मात्रै हो ।
नत्र त म हुनु र नहुनुमा के फरक छ र?
साँच्चै भन्ने हो भने
यहाँ हामी कसैको अस्तित्व छैन ।
अस्तित्व छ त केवल सम्बन्धहरुको,
राम्रा र नराम्रा सम्बन्धहरुको,
किसिम किसिमका सम्बन्धहरुको,
हरेक किसिमका सम्बन्धहरुको,
अनि मात्र सम्बन्धहरुको ।

स्वतन्त्र हुनखोजेको जति बहाना गरे पनि
जति देखावटी चाहना गरे पनि
आखिर मान्छे सम्बन्धकै जालोमा जेलिन चाहन्छ ।
त्यही जालोमा गुटुमुटिएर न्यानो महसुस गर्न चाहन्छ ।
अनि आफूलाई सुरक्षित महसूस गर्न चाहन्छ ।
आफ्नो अस्तित्व महसूस गर्न चाहन्छ ।
हो म पनि अाफ्नो अस्तित्व महसूस गर्न चाहन्छु ।
आफूलाई सुरक्षित र न्यानो महसूस गर्न चाहन्छु ।
तर एउटा सम्बन्ध भर्खर गर्ल्याम्मगुर्लुम्म ढल्यो ।
अनि म एउटा नयाँ सम्बन्धको खोजीमा छु ।


Last edited: 26-Oct-11 01:24 AM

 
Posted on 10-26-11 2:24 AM     [Snapshot: 2236]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Kya khatara khatara lekchhau keta ho?
 
Posted on 10-26-11 11:00 PM     [Snapshot: 2324]     Reply [Subscribe]
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hats off to all the creative writers...
 
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म तिमी अनि हाम्रो समय 
माया भावना छताछुल्ल सपना उड्छ खुल्ला आकाशमा 
खुसि जीवनमा म अनि तिमी 
 
हाइकु मा एउटा कोशिश .
 
- थाने

 



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