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sum off , for a minute I thought you had had it with Ms Pandey and the bullet was going to be the nail in the coffin for her. :) Since you let her live on I am still waiting to see where all this finally leads to.

Nicely written Sum off... Waitin for a poetic justice to D in the end, but hey she got this far, didnt' she??

hey sumoff,

Your narration is amazing. ANd your observation and analytical power is
awesome as well. I have not seen you do a lot of conversations but I think
you must rock in that too. WHat i like most about you is that for a guy
to sketch a character of a woman and make it so credible is simply great.
I know a lot of guys, and most of the times I have not seen them have any
clue about the politics a woman can play...so similar to all the guys that cant
see through divyeshowri's facade...you however seem to know what goes on so well.
I am proud of you.

and regarding that dialogue, do u know any immigration officer....i think what sumoff means is that....by catching the bledshoe or whatever guy in his most weak moment....when the fact that he is married comes out when he was trying to hide the very thing.....she exploits this guy to further her cause. he is so humiliated then and so does not want the truth to get out that he will do anything for her.

“When you cry in an empty room, it echoes, and that echo only reminds you that you are the one who is crying. There is no bigger grief than you listening to you grieve.”- Marvelous

Waiting for more of your outstanding penmanship.
Have a good weekend senor.

i hate divyeshwori pandey. i hopeshe rots in hell in the next and last part!!!!!!

oh yeah, divyshowri WAS havving a sexual relationship:

The two quickly became friends with an upgradeable option.

Upgradeable option? hmm?????

so she blackmails him and he hooks her up with immigration.

nepalonmymind,
Thank you for explaining it. You got it. It's fun to write for readers like you.
Vantage Point,
That is indeed one of my favorite lines too.
Others,
A lot of you are speculating on how this story will end. It looks like no one is paying any attention to the story. Every chapter in the beginning has a reference to present (now) where Divyeswori, Radha, and Christopher are seen around that hall where some activity is about to begin. That is real time. This is more of a biographical story; it’s essay-like, straightforward, and linear. I think you guys watch way too much of Shyamalan. There will be no big bang ending here. Even the smart ones in Sajha are speculating on how it will end. Beats me.

So when do we get last part?:-)

hey Sum off........
where is ur Story of your recent marriage IN Nepal. You didnot complete that .........article...........common i wana know how ir ur married life................

sumoff,
how r ya? u never answered (O: me re kya!!!

r ya still made @ me ho??? apologize once again .. okey

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PS.. once again hoez ur married life? (O:

it is in the present. It's stated explicitly. he's just referring to the incidents of the past.
I'm just mad at the woman for exploiting so many innocent people (and maybe not so innocent)

timetraveller jyu,
hajur sanga ta power chha.. pls pls go back in time and teach her a lesson k 6 bichar...
(O: just kidding hain.. pheri.. hajur pani risaunu hola (O:

how r ya?
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sum off -:O :O
i just read the whole story and it's well written and everything and all that!! but but i don't like it!! she's so mean and stupid and mean and stupid and mean....
and it's so sad!! :(

i don't even think there could be a happy ending to this!! :S i'd feel bad even if someone or even Radha beat her to death or even if she got married with someone and had ten kids and lived happily ever after ke, cause she wouldn't deserve it!! :S
no no i don't like this story!! ufffff!! :S

Guys,
People started saying 'I hate Divyeshowri'...no sh#t! Of course we hate woman like that. There is no question about it :-)
Xena,
She is NOT dumb, you are. I'm sorry but I had to say this. Divyeshwori... was not having a toddler or child who needed 24/7 attention. She adopted someone who was already grown up. Not to mention, she could careless about the kid. If you had paid attention to the passage that reads- Radha becomes a “sweetheart” or a “darling” around Divyeswori’s friends, who mostly hear: “Sabitri chhori, why don’t you go to your room and study?”There is not a single book in Radha’s room. And there is no Sabitri.

So, it was like having a grown up 'step daughter' for some women in Nepal who don't give a damn about those kids but make them work and abuse like anything. I have a couple of Bit#@s like those in Nepal who deserve to rot in hell, but anyway....

Bhushan, thanks for explaining to reader like Xena who fails to see things.

And at last but not least, I think a woman like Divyeshwori can prove that 'EUTA MARYA MADHISEY LE 100 WATA JIUNDO NEPALI LAI THAGCHHA' bhanne kura. I wish every woman in Nepal as gifted as Divyeshwori in terms of dealing with people BUT IN A RIGHT AND MORAL WAY.

Sum_Off...Don't stop your pen...We are waiting.. :)

nails/timetraveller: The point of this story is to vex you via Divyeswori. If you are angry, it’s working on you.

thapap: Why are you apologizing? You seem to be too nice a guy to offend anyone. I’m really curious as to why are apologizing. Have you posted something about me in some other thread? I almost never read other threads.

explorer/bideshi/chatmandude/Xena/sweetP/Imi/: It looks like my regular readers only log on during weekdays. I will post the last part sometime this afternoon (Monday 7/31, EST)--assuming I don't get too busy at work.

loveforeva: I’d rather talk about this story in this thread. I’m sorry that this story did not appeal to you.

Sum off:

Thank you so much for writing this kind of story. I printed the whole story and read it in a single gasp yesterday. It is so well written. You made my Sunday morning a good morning. Thanx a lot.

I think she entered USA in October 1997 instead of 1995.

Keep it coming.

Waiting on the final episode.

Let this story serve as an epitome to "Money does not buy happiness."

With love for money, Ms. Pandey seems to be heading for disaster.

Great writing Sum_Off.