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mottu
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Posted on 06-19-09 6:29
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yo dynamite ley malai saraiii jangayoo..!!! DYNOOmite got alot of free time... justo cha one week ma 3 wata story lekhya bajiyaa ley :P ma jibroo tokdaii chu tarsiyera yetii dherai story ..!!! I am thinkin' of writing one ... Now I think I should break my silence !! Silence was golden but now I think Speakin' with ur heart with ur mind at once breakin' the silence is worth readin'...!!! I am commin' soon with ALU justoo STORY......!!! -mottu the story will be continued in this thread...!!! DON't miss it :P coz it's special edition LOL..!!!
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Posted on 07-16-09 7:30
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Hatti ayo Hatti aayoo fusssaa... !!!
It's a 20 year long story. It's been a secret story. I am fully responsible for hiding this story from the entire world.I don't think I would be able to hide it any longer. I feel my body is weak. I am revealing this story just because Iwant the world tothink and say what they have to sayto me. Did Ireally do the wrong thing ? Am I wrong or right ?Was what I did fair? Should I be I be punished for what I did in the last 20 years. Now, I think I am old enough to die. I can see the horizon not far away. I have to wear glasses to read the daily newspaper. Without glasses I am a blind woman. So, before I leave this world . I think it's better to let the world know what I did in the past 20 years. This is my first effort in writing the story. And 70% whatever arein the storyaren't written by me. I hope that it will be a good read. A read that will help me get my answers. And it will definitely changethe world of alot of people. ****JULY 23rd , 1989 I haven't been able to focus myself. Things don't seem normal with me these days. Life seems to be brighter than I had thought it to be. I didn't use to like school days. But, these days I like it more than I could imagine . I think this is the reason why I am in school now. I think you are the precious destiny that's on the way to make my life beautifulforever. I never thought thatI would be where I am today. I know how it feels . I never thought that this would really happen to me.I can feel the cool breeze of air full of love. I can feel the warmth of the cool breeze in my arms. I want to make you feel how it feels and holdyou in my arms. And never unfold my arms coz I want to make always feel what I feel with my heart and soul. You will always be with with me. I find myself not far away from the peak of the world. Every single stepsseems to be easy. I think life really have a meaning . I want to sing for you. You are the reason why I am in this world. There is no more crystalclear reason for your presence in this world than me. Stars seems to be brighter than before . The nights are never dark and are full of wishes.And days are never boring and it's full of blessings. The puzzle is solved,the secret is revealed. And the code is "I LOVE YOU." This date will always remembered . My hopes and expectations are high up there waiting for the dream that I dreamt to come true. WITH LOVE, RAJIV TO be continued.....!!!
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mottu
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Posted on 07-16-09 8:06
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Feels good to be back again...!!! I am sorry for the format that came out after I posted the story. I found it quite weird and hope yu all readers did feel the same.with LOVE n HATE :P -MOTTU
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mottu
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Posted on 07-21-09 6:12
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mero loote girl friend part 2 ( hatii aayo hatti aayo fussa..)
23rd July, 1989 will always be remembered . And it's a day that's the first day of the 20 yrs
that is hidden. And I am revealin' all the truths.
There was a big bang . I wondered what it was . I went to my room to look outside what really
had happened. As I entered the room , I found the glass of the window broken. One of the many
window frame was empty and the glass was all over on the floor. I wondered who broke
the window .On the bed was a paper that was crushed up.I opened the paper and found a big
rock.Then I knew the rock was used to pass a message written on the paper.
Well that was the first of many love letters that I read that was written by rajiv. I looked outside to find
how this rajiv really looked like. At first I was furious, and I felt like beating up the person who broke the
window. But after reading the letter I didn't feel anything bad. But I was curious to know who is Rajiv .
After reading the letter.I cleaned the room and hid the letter under my pillow. I didn't want any one to
know that I receive a letter from Rajiv. I wanted it to bea secret. And it really remained secret for 20 years
which is really amazing.
It was 12:00 am but I couldn't sleep. One question was buzzing in my head all the time who is Rajiv ?
I started to think about Rajiv after I read the letter. Since then everything seems to be alot different than
usual. I wasn't myself at all. Alot of things were rolling in my head.
There was a bell ring and it woke me up. The clock that was on the table showed that it was 7:00 clock.
And the bright lights woke me up. And I can still remember the dream that I saw that night...!!
TO BE CONTINUED..!!
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Posted on 08-03-09 8:15
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hatii aayo hatti aayo fussa.... bro i thought this sory was a comedy at first... after reading it, It was not about Hatti at all... but seems like u are writing a gal's part hehehe (are u the lutte GF???) Anyways let your creative ideas run wild be inspired. regards, NN
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Posted on 08-04-09 10:06
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NN diju..!! THANKS loads.. NN diju tapai first person mero thread ma comment garney :) Well I'll continue writing... ABOo bistaraii lekhchu sabai part... HOpe yu'll LOVE reading it till the END..!!! -mottu
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Posted on 08-05-09 2:16
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Most welcome bro... enjoy writing hai. take care! Hope to meet ya in chatroom one day ;) Nn
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Posted on 08-09-09 3:52
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DIJu..!!! been quite a while hajur SB ma na aako..!!! see ya ASAP in SHOUT BOX..!! -mottey
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Posted on 06-19-10 4:44
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Where are the rest of the story Mottu?
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